I was looking over my past blog posts and noticed that my post titled "Where Words Fail, Music Speaks" was missing a conclusion and had some errors I had not noticed. Now I had the opportunity to edit it and was hoping to receive some feedback on it. Specifically I want readers to comment about the content and grammar. Don't be shy to say if you do not like the artists I picked and why. Like the Professor said, feedback is all about sandwiching it.
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