I was looking over my past blog posts and noticed that my post titled "Where Words Fail, Music Speaks" was missing a conclusion and had some errors I had not noticed.  Now I had the opportunity to edit it and was hoping to receive some feedback on it.  Specifically I want readers to comment about the content and grammar.  Don't be shy to say if you do not like the artists I picked and why.  Like the Professor said, feedback is all about sandwiching it. 

9/24/2013 02:51:07

I like Ruben Blades, and of course Lady Gaga, I mean who wouldn't, she is amazing. The article was organized, and well written.


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